Help me choose the packaging design for my freckle pen π€ (photo inside the post)
I'm thrilled to announce that my first product package designs are finally out!
I have two options to choose from, and I'd love to hear your thoughts on which one of the two you prefer and WHY (comment below).
Can't wait to hear your feedback!
I have two options to choose from, and I'd love to hear your thoughts on which one of the two you prefer and WHY (comment below).
Can't wait to hear your feedback!
Here are the options!!
Comments
I like 2 the best because I knew immediately what I was looking at. One more thing to consider (although feel free to disagree with me), if itβs not to late I think it could add some more visual interest to make the packaging a brown color (for dirt). Just my opinion but I think it could be cool.
I voted for 2 because I think it has more interest, maybe making the vine and leaves a brighter green?
Agree with the other callouts to rework #1 with more concentrated seeds, but my biggest feedback was around colors. So many pen products on market are either black or white - which likely is a costing choice - but it wouldnt it be so lovely as a deep raspBERRY or wine color with pale pink accents to help it pop in a makeup bag? π
I voted for two because itβs prettier, but do you think there could be a combo, with the vines on top, and the seeds on the bottom, laid out like they would be on a strawberry π so basically the cap is the βtopβ of the strawberry and the pen is the βfruitβ of the strawberry? Like the actual fruit?
Iβm loving the strawberry seeds! So cute! But maybe more of them but somehow incorporate actual strawberries as well π₯Ή