I like 2 the best because I knew immediately what I was looking at. One more thing to consider (although feel free to disagree with me), if itβs not to late I think it could add some more visual interest to make the packaging a brown color (for dirt). Just my opinion but I think it could be cool.
Agree with the other callouts to rework #1 with more concentrated seeds, but my biggest feedback was around colors. So many pen products on market are either black or white - which likely is a costing choice - but it wouldnt it be so lovely as a deep raspBERRY or wine color with pale pink accents to help it pop in a makeup bag? π
I voted for two because itβs prettier, but do you think there could be a combo, with the vines on top, and the seeds on the bottom, laid out like they would be on a strawberry π so basically the cap is the βtopβ of the strawberry and the pen is the βfruitβ of the strawberry? Like the actual fruit?